Brief 1- Crit

the crit has actually been really useful and has gave me a bit more confidence in my design, some of the feedback I got was: 

• the patterns don't really mean much. 

that is true and I only started to do them for decoration purposes, but now I am thinking maybe I can have more meaningful symbols to go with my content, or possibly play with water colour and texture to symbolise chaos within my design process.  

• think carefully about stock

I do need to think about stock, I think I am going to need to look into something a lot heavier so it looks more profesional on the desk and feels better in your hand 

• looks slightly childish 

this is something I need to work on, I don't want it to look childish but I don't want it to look boring 

• maybe think about making a bit bigger

to make it bigger I would just need to print it on A2, its only smaller as I am test printing it